I-Search Paper-Revisions

I revised my paper by adding a more attention grabbing introduction. I made the reader want to learn more about my quest to understand my topic of boys and literacy. I went back and checked over my interview summary to make sure it was concise enough. I also checked to make sure each section transitioned well from one to the next. I then looked over my conclusion and it seemed like I didn't need to change it in looking at my first draft. Overall, I think I learned a lot about my topic after this assignment.